Sample:
She
stood before a black pit, watching it grow wider and deeper as it caved into
itself. She felt the earth beneath her feet giving way, and dreaded the plunge
that would follow. As she balanced there on the precipice, a foggy image
floated up at her from the void and then came into focus, and she could clearly
make out a pale face suspended there in the dark —an unshaven face with
half-closed eyes, framed by wet, lank hair. Its mouth did not move, yet somehow
it whispered regret to her in a ceaseless chant.
Suddenly
she fell and the face rose up towards her, drawing closer and closer. An
unvoiced scream itched in her throat for an endless moment.
The eyes sprang open...
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ReplyDeleteCongrats!
You were a big inspiration to get me out there and working to add maps to my own work. Thanks!
I have only read the sample above, but I wanted to let you know, that I thought it was beautiful. It almost read like a poem with each word flowing into the next. If the rest of your story reads like that. I believe you truly have a gem.
ReplyDeleteThanks very, very much Bridget! Very kind of you! I will check it out. :)
ReplyDeleteAnd Anonymous: Extremely kind of you. :) Its only 99 cents and, yes, the rest of it is at least as good as the sample. Promise.
How well that reads. ;)
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